In search of Jim.............

[janedo]

Why post a movie idea on a website.

[mav]

I like the plot and Drew Barrymore

[Conor]

wow wgreat plot! HOPE IT WORKS OUT!!!

[fluffy]

Janedo...............have you been on the board before or under a different alias??...............you sound VERY familiar................

fluffy

[janedo]

no fluffy I am really and honestly a newbie to the Jim Carrey message board. Maybe you really like the movie idea so it sounds familiar

[Jimenem]

thats probably it. It was excellent.

[mav]

Janedo's inspired me to write a story , hope you enjoy it peeps(using new word)

Meteorites (no it's not sci-fi, just symbolic of personal struggle)

Caleb is a a quiet, withdrawn young man. He and his father run an electronics store. Things are peaceful until one day at closing hours the shop is held up by a couple of thugs and in the ensuing drama his father (quite unintentionally) gets killed. Caled is heartbroken. His father was a constant support throughout his life, especially during his childhood which had been plagued by hallucinations that doctors couldn't explain. But he had overcome those with his father's loving encouragement and carved himself a decent life. For Caleb, that normalcy has come to a grinding halt. His anguish is private, the only outward signs are the few quiet tears he sheds in front of his girlfrient Jenna.
But his grief has been turning into a brewing rage. A pervertness which had long been tamed resurfaces. He continues to run the shop, but his mind constantly flashes back to the day his father was killed, until he no longer feels helpless, but just lives and breathes the day of reckoning. Over many days, he gathers clues and comes to know one the killers, Marshall and follows his activities unseen until he knows it like the back of his hand. When he comes to know that his sister, Angela, is a student at the local college, things start to take shape in Caleb's mind. His intention is to kidnap her. He follows her and woos her, unknown to anyone else. Just as she doesn't know her brother is a criminal, so is Angela unaware that she's dating a guy whose father he had killed. Caleb eventually kidnaps her and hides her in a log cabin in a forest.
Marshall is besides himself with rage. He put all his efforts and resources in searching his sister, until he narrows his suspicion on Caleb, but has no way of knowing the truth unless he confronts him. Which he does one night, breaking into his house and threathening to kill if Caleb doesn't speak up. Caleb escapes and heads towards the forest where he has hidden Angela. The climax is a gruelling chase in the forest with mind games, suspense, until Angela ends up killing Marshall. (or maybe Caleb is killed?)
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[janedo]

I love it Mav and glad i could be of inspiration for you to write...........but personally it sounds like you were a writer already.............dont kill Caleb It also sounds like you need an agent. There is soooo much talent in Jim Carrey Online

[mav]

Aw thanks for the generous feedback Janedo. Yeah, there is a lot of talent here....

... maybe I should let Caleb live, he doesn't deserve to be killed...

...and i better start looking for an agent oh, wait! i dont have a screenplay yet

[Jimenem]

[mav]

Thank you, Thank you!
At your service, here's another one,
Long, long ago on Long Beach, Mr. LLongo Longone ..... .....happy haunted house.... and Mr Appleton ate another apple. The End.
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Thanks for the encouragement Jimenen
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[Jimenem]

Your welcom

My pleasure, Really!

[lammy]

Thank you, Thank you!
At your service, here's another one,
Long, long ago on Long Beach, Mr. LLongo Longone ..... .....happy haunted house.... and Mr Appleton ate another apple. The End.
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Thanks for the encouragement Jimenen
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You guys are so talented-

[Conor]

hey whyd you take down the plot...it was good.